Reflection on Informative Draft

Zhen 1

Kenneth Zhen

English 21003, Section M

Professor Matyakubova

13 September 2017

 Reflection on Informative Draft

            While brainstorming I had trouble finding sources for this topic. I believe sleep paralysis isn’t a major threat to society seeing that there are not many sources with any real studies. Every source I have been looking through have been saying all survey. Their experiments were surveys given to students and etc. Knowing that sleep paralysis doesn’t kill you I believe people have stopped any research or experimentation related to it. There is just not enough evidence to prove sleep deprivation is a factor and the cause of sleep paralysis.

            The sources I have been looking through are in EBSCO and finding solid evidence using authentic sources is nearly impossible. I believe my essay at this current state is a mess and needs a lot of revising, given the little time we had I wasn’t able to go near to perfecting it. With the information, I have provided I believe I did my best even with the lack of evidence out there. I believe scientists need to look into sleep paralysis more and not ignore it because it isn’t a death threat to society.