Reflection on argumentative Final

Zhen 1

Kenneth Zhen

English 21003, Section M

Professor Matyakubova

8 October 2017

Reflection to Final Argumentative

            While reviewing my peer’s writing I noticed the structure of his introduction was catchy and met the criteria. The structure was very well planned out unlike the essay I wrote. As I still have some problems now writing the introduction I believe it has improved my sense of writing skills doing peer review. Being able to see writings of my classmates we are exposing ourselves to new structures and styles of writing we haven’t seen before. Some I have gained or improved while doing this peer review was being persuasive in my writing. By reading and seeing how persuasive the writings of my own colleagues I was determined to do better.

            The way I improved how persuasive my essay would be finding authentic sources. Sources that are credible can persuade the reader significantly because the writers would be experts in this specific field. The person who read my essay also helped me notice I still haven’t wrote a thesis nor a counter claim yet. Other skills I gained from doing this peer review is improving the structure of my essay. By seeing papers from my peers, I was able to incorporate their writing structure into my own writing. Doing this makes it easier for the reader by making the essay smoother.